Sunday, April 25, 2010

She's Not Of My League.

1
this Sickness has come,
to its crescendo,
adagio but veraciouslY significAnt,
it's love,
that laZily knocked,
the windows of this chainted heart.


2
yes,
i am starting to love thou,
and yes,
my heart is vulnerable,
yes and yes,
this heart longs for thy love,


3
see,
We Are of the,
differeNt league,
equal footIe?
not even close,
for thou Are,
not for me,
for i am far bridge,
Zero than thou are,


4
i shan't be longing for thou,
not anyMore,
bEcausE it'll only hinder thou,
from climbing up the stairways,
that will lead thou,
to the brink of glory and triumph,


5
this my very last ultimatum!
O' Sorrow,
stay away from me!
i can't bear to jeopardise her future!
it would be the very last thing,
i would ever gamble on.


6
come what may,
i've learnt to forethought on the aftermaths,
i will try,
try at my best length,
to fade thy images,
out of this tormented heart,
out , out and out,
For eternity.





Discussion :
1.it takes me 3 hours to complete this so-called work of art.I hafta admit,it's a silent cry from the heart.Dun need to shed my tears.I know how to deal with it.I dun need your sympathy.I just need your empathy.Sorry for such lousy grammar etc etc. Truly sucks at it.

2.Kalau ada silap tu , tegur lah.That's for you to find out. "grammar cam *¥$€ pun nak wat poem ka?" .Kalau korang fikir camtu, aku akan jawab "macam mana grammar etc etc aku tak lousy, dah semua kedekut ilmu".XD

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Sunday, April 25, 2010

She's Not Of My League.

1
this Sickness has come,
to its crescendo,
adagio but veraciouslY significAnt,
it's love,
that laZily knocked,
the windows of this chainted heart.


2
yes,
i am starting to love thou,
and yes,
my heart is vulnerable,
yes and yes,
this heart longs for thy love,


3
see,
We Are of the,
differeNt league,
equal footIe?
not even close,
for thou Are,
not for me,
for i am far bridge,
Zero than thou are,


4
i shan't be longing for thou,
not anyMore,
bEcausE it'll only hinder thou,
from climbing up the stairways,
that will lead thou,
to the brink of glory and triumph,


5
this my very last ultimatum!
O' Sorrow,
stay away from me!
i can't bear to jeopardise her future!
it would be the very last thing,
i would ever gamble on.


6
come what may,
i've learnt to forethought on the aftermaths,
i will try,
try at my best length,
to fade thy images,
out of this tormented heart,
out , out and out,
For eternity.





Discussion :
1.it takes me 3 hours to complete this so-called work of art.I hafta admit,it's a silent cry from the heart.Dun need to shed my tears.I know how to deal with it.I dun need your sympathy.I just need your empathy.Sorry for such lousy grammar etc etc. Truly sucks at it.

2.Kalau ada silap tu , tegur lah.That's for you to find out. "grammar cam *¥$€ pun nak wat poem ka?" .Kalau korang fikir camtu, aku akan jawab "macam mana grammar etc etc aku tak lousy, dah semua kedekut ilmu".XD

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